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katiehorses75- 02-15-2007
Name: Twinkle Trick

Nickname: Twink (xD)

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Breed: Unicorn

Appearance:
Small, with the typical body structure of a Unicorn. A black body base, violet eyes, typically seen with a blissfully ignorant smile on. Still rather youngish, she retains a bit of her babyish looks, with wide, innocent eyes, and a tiny bit of baby fat. All together makes for a rather, cute, beautiful looking pony. The main color of her mane and tail is white, with a dark purple streak the same color as her eyes in both the mane and tail. Her mane is cut somewhat short so as to not hinder her movement, and has a bit of a wavy tendency to it. her tail, however, is allowed to grow long, but she cuts it just short of touching the ground, so as to keep dirt from marring the white strands. Her symbol consists of several tiny white stars, clustered randomly on her rump with a slight trail down the outside leg, though not enough of one to be considered fancy. The white contrasts strongly with the black, making the tiny stars seem to glow.

Family: Moondancer; Grandmother
Mother; Pony of Darkness
Father; Unknown (Pony of Darkness. ;D)

Family/Brief History:
Her grandmother was Moondancer, but Twinkle Trick is blissfully ignorant of this fact.
The only family she's ever known was her mother. (Who shall be unnamed, because if I name her, people won't be able to use that name later on and such and it'll be a big mess. D= Let's just call her Mom.)
Her mother was a dreamer tied down too young in life, bogged with the harsh life that most had come to know all their lives with the dissapearence of Megan. She regretted the losses of all her dreams, and was unhappy to recognize the same dreamer qualities in her own daughter. As such, she resolved that her daughter would live out her dreams for the both of them, and worked hard to keep harsh truths from Twink. They were a resonably rich family, Twink never really found herself wanting of anything, except an adventure of some sort.
Her mother told her that her father had gone on a journey when she was a baby, Twink always asked when he was coming back, her mother would always reply 'I don't know, honey.' As such, Twink grew up without any major father figure, and was quite a wild child, despite Mom's attempts to control her. Eventually, her mother just gave up. Twink's favorite childhood passtime was pretending to go on an adventure, and she'd always stray all about, occasionally getting lost. Her mother told her many fanciful stories of the 'Before Time', filled with wonderous tales of Megan, the flutter ponies, Ogg, Moochick, the Rainbow of Light, all sorts of wild adventures in which good triumphed over evil.
Twink grew up with a strong will, a sense of adventure, a wild imagination, and a desire to 'do'.
On her fourteenth birthday, Twink and her Mother went out on a picnic, up at the top of a waterfall. Twink wanted to swim, and considered herself quite a good swimmer, though she was much too weak to try anything except a lazy river. Her mother forbade her to go in the water, but Twink, being headstrong, didn't listen, and while her mother was out picking berries, dove in, and attempted to try the current. Unfortunately, the water was far too strong, and she quickly tired and was swept towards the falls. She managed to cling to an overhanging branch, and call for help. Her mother heard her, and came charging to the rescue. Mom dove in, took Twink on her back, and attempted to swim her to shore. Mom wasn't as good a swimmer as Twink, and tired even faster. She managed to get her only daughter up on the bank to safety, but didn't have enough energy left to save herself. Twink watched with horrified eyes, too weak to help, as her mother was swept over the waterfall. She blacked out, and woke much later, when the sun was just beginning to set and dusk was upon them. Weakened, she forced herself to her feet and clambered down the rocky path to the bottom of the waterfall, frantically calling for her mother. She searched all night. When the first light of dawn was beginning to show, Twink found the body of her mother, washed on a pebbly shore a little ways down, when the water calmed slightly. It was far too late to save her, and had always been, her mother had recieved a sharp blow to the head from a rock at the bottom of the waterfall, and had been instantly killed. Twink spent the day mourning over her mother's body, not knowing what to do, but fortunately was found by a family friend, whom had organized a search party for the two. The friend took Twink to her house and got her cleaned up, and organized the funeral. Twink wenk to bed and refused to get up for the waking, but did manage to go to the funeral.
She was taken in by the family, having no other relatives of her own (she insisted her dad would take care of her, the family merely said he was too far away to find), and they cared for her. She spent the year in a state of depression, hardly eating, spending most of her time sleeping.
Her mother had written a will, everything went to Twink, to be watched after until Twink's eighteenth birthday. (approximately 20 years in human time, I think).
Twink went back to the house, and found the old storybooks her mother used to read to her. She remembered all the dreams she'd had, and came to the realization that mourning wasn't going to do anything. Borne with a new resolve, she decided she would go to Flutter Valley and see the beautiful Flutter Ponies that her mother had always told her about. After that, she resolved to begin searching for her unknown father. She needed to find him, and tell him of mother's death, of course. And then it would be happily ever after and she'd live with her father and he'd welcome her with loving arms... The fairytales said so. Forcing any doubts she had into the back of her mind, she packed lodestones, food, and some other survival items into a pack (like Lickedy Split!), put on her set of purple legwarmers, wrote a note explaining what she was doing to the family that had taken her in and left it on the kitchen table, and left in the dead of night, approximately a week after her fifteenth birthday.
She set out on the road to Flutter Valley, planning on stopping and talking to the Moochick on the way to get help (I mean, of course he must be still alive! And that Rainbow would be useful...). She doesn't know that meanwhile, back in the populated part of Dream Valley, the family is frantic with worry, as is anyone else who knows her story (it got into the newspaper, as did her runaway), and a price has been put on finding her and returning her safely to the family, alive.

Special Abilities:
Twink has an affinity for winking, as all unicorns do, but she's a tad bit better at it than most. This comes from her relation to Moondancer, a Pony who had quite a good winking ability back in BD. She can wink a tad bit farther and faster than the average Unicorn does.
Twink is a rather atheletic pony, her mother taught her how to dance, and she kept up rigerous training until her mother's death.
She was quite a strong swimmer for her age, though now she has a mortal fear of deep or running water since her mother's death, even to the point of refusing baths unless they are quite shallow.
This unicorn has rather fantastic jumping abilities, and is a speedy runner. She can scale mountains and rocks and such with a little less talent than a mountain goat, favoring their style of bounding up in a series of leaps and hops. She has a large amount of endurance, and can keep up a fast pace for a long time.
She doesn't know this very well, but occasionally she can make her cutie mark and horn glow in the dark.

Location of RPing: Dream Valley, possibly Flutter Valley later on.

Father Information and Planning:
I dunno. I was sorta planning on her eventually finding him. =O I'm hoping that midway on her adventure she'll get sidetracked by a BIGGER adventure and keep her father in mind, but travel all over and do adventuresome stuff. As for ever finding him, I thought I'd just have her think on him ICly all the time and put finding him on hiatus until someone showed up willing to RP as him. I was considering making him a pony of the Volcano Order or one of the clan ponies from the Twilight Islands, but that would by mixed up, so that's on hiatus too.

Dragonblossom- 02-15-2007
She sounds wonderful Katie! I had to read through your history twice and double check the pony vs. age limitations to make sure everything was A-ok. I think if you add something along the lines of:

Family: Father (unknown pony of darkness), Mother (Deceased, Pony of Darkness) this will make it clear.

Because if her mother is a pony of light she couldn't have a baby of 15 years of age. She would have been too young to have Twinkle Trick. Also, for Moderator information, her father, is he a PoD? I'm guessing he is. You don't have to make that part of her history public knowledge but the moderators will need ot know what plans you have concerning him if any. It doesn't have to be detailed, basically enough so we can make sure his part in the world fits with what is known. You're more than welcome to PM me or any other moderator this information.

Other than that I see no problems with Twinkle! I'm excited I LOVE her detailed history. I'd love to RP with her. mlpeod/teeth.gif

Let me know about the parents and I'll approve, then you'll only need one more approval to play.

katiehorses75- 02-15-2007
Yay!
I edited the post. ^.^
I'd love to RP with you sometime! Wow, a Mod wants me to RP... =O *feels special*
I added a smaller family section above the History, and I added a Father section at the bottom. mlpeod/teeth.gif Hope it's all okay!

ForeignVisitor- 02-16-2007
Just a quick bump here to say I've seen this, kay? Only I gotta run right now, my bad. I'll do a review later, unless another mod has done a review before, okay? mlpeod/wink.gif

And again, welcome!

katiehorses75- 02-16-2007
Mmkay! I can't wait to start RPing. *paces anxiously*

Sider- 02-17-2007
I've read over your character, I like have well you've fleshed her out.
There's one issue I have, don't worry, it's not a major one.

It's her age.

Even though the rules clearly state that it is possible to have a 15yr old character.. it's not generally recomended.

See, here's the thing...
The oldest "POD" (pony of darkness) is 28 years old. It was 28 years ago that the first POD was born. 10 years after this happened, the great death occurred, wiping out all Pony's of light (ie: Moondancer, Firefly etc..) therefore at this time, the oldest ponies were 10yrs old or less. That was eighteen years ago from present game time. That means the first ponies of darkness (born from pastel ponies-ponies of light) are now between the ages of 18 and 28 years old.

Now if we have a 15year, that individual would have had to been born from a POD since there were no ponies of light left 15 years ago... We know that the oldest a POD can be is 28... lets do the math.

28-15=13

Twink's mom would have been 13 when she was born. Kinda young. This is why it's not recommended.

Note... After going over your bio a second-third time, it seems that you've got it figured out and that her mom being quite young works well.

So taking this into consideration, I approve.

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katiehorses75- 02-17-2007
Uwah, now I'm confused.... @_@

But... Happy?

Approved! WOOT!

*does the happy dance*

So now I can go all crazy and make a post and start to RP yayayayayay! *screams with joy and runs off to go post*

ForeignVisitor- 02-18-2007
Well, see, what Sider is telling you, Katie, is that, while it is physically possible for so young a pony to get pregnant, given the dark background of EoD we generally tend to think that it would probably have been the result of ..ermm.."forced sex", or some other not very nice thing (yeaaah..pardon for the "harsh words" ^^ that's why we say EoD is PG-13 and some adult situations do occur).

The maths can be confusing, but actually, it's mere arithmetics ^__^ If Twink is 15, it means she was born in the year 3 AGD. Which means, her mother got pregnant in the year 2 AGD (ponies take 11 months to give birth, I think mlpeod/tongue.gif ). Considering that no pony of darkness could have been born before the year 9 BD, that gives you...that Twink's mother, being a pony of darkness, couldn't have been older than 11 when she got pregnant (or 11 and a few months). Considering our pony. vs. human years scale, I think that would have been more or less like a 13 year old human. Biologically possible but...hmm...well you get the picture. mlpeod/wink.gif .

I too have re-read the background history, and I think it is perfectly possible. Well, at least, you don't make it "impossible to have happened" in any part of the story, but I just wanted to draw your attention to this fact, and to take it into consideration for your posting kay? Specially when it comes to her father, etc etc.

As a side note, I loved her history! If there's something I really like is well developped, deep chars with long, well thought out and complicated backgrounds! I love that so much that I tend to make my chars way more complicate than I can handle! ^___^ Aaaah @__@ yeah, sorry. Ermm..yeah, nice job. I loved the drama, it was touching. Oh! and...if she's heading for Flutter Valley..well you see, she'll most probably run into something unexpected. But I'm not giving anything away. Wait and see mlpeod/wink.gif .

Oh, yes! Before I forget. You might wanna take a look at this list of G1 descendants. Some of us in the game (like you) love having our chars be descendants from our favorite G1 canon ponies (since we can't rp G1 canon ponies). I made that list so that we could have a quick reference of all the "taken G1s" in the game, so to say, and try to keep it 100% updated. So I'm going to add Twink's relationship with Moondancer now. I have a strong feeling you indeed read the website very carefully, since you seem to have followed the advice of making grandchildren from canon G1s instead of children, so we don't run out of G1s mlpeod/wink.gif . It's a very good advice, keeps open the possibility to have several descendants without interfering with other people's history. For example, our fellow member Angelic Wonder has a character which is a descendant from Baby Moondancer. But since Twink is the daughter of, obviously, another daughter of Moondancer's (one that was born as a pony of darkness, obviously, a younger sister of Baby Moondancer), there's really no risk of interfering with each other's stories. They're far enough (they're cousins, actually). Not that you girls can't try to work out some sort of relationship between your chars if you ever desired to do so!

Mkkaaay, I think I'm not forgetting anything. Sorry I couldn't do the review any sooner, but these days I'm busy as you have no idea. You already got two approvals, so no need to give mineBut I would have given it to you, anyway. So, keep having fun!

katiehorses75- 02-18-2007
Oo, cousiness! =O Yeah, Angelic Wonder told me that on my active character thread... They can meet and be all like 'woot!' x3

Yeah, I was thinking kinda along the lines of an arranged marriage for Twink's mom, but forced sex could also be a possibility. In which case, Twink can avenge her mother and kill her dad! D=< But that would present a moral dillema because if Twink's mom wasn't forced, Twink wouldn't be around... Oh no, I sense EMO in the future! =O Or I could just keep it with an arranged marriage. It's all debateable. ^.^

Oo, interestingness in Flutter Valley. =3 That sounds FUN. I'm planning on actually having Twink go through the various boards, so she'll be switching from Whispering Woods to the Shadow Forest to Dream Valley to Flutter Pass and stuff, so the posting is gonna be a bit crazy. @_@ Currently, Twink is travelling through the Whispering Woods and accidentally getting high off of shrooms, yay! xD Ah, fun times.

I can't wait to run into the interestingness. =3 Just tell me if I need to make Twink journey faster in order to catch it in time. mlpeod/tongue.gif

Alright, I'm off to go take a look at the list of G1 Decendants! I'm pretty sure I already read it over, but now I'll pay more attention because it concerns me. =3

Thank you! ^.^

Dragonblossom- 02-19-2007
And just because I want ot do so officially. (I WUBS my approval stamp!!)

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Dragonblossom- 02-19-2007
hehe my character Lightmoon is related to Moondancer as well, through her daughter baby Moondancer who is his mternal grandmother so that would make Moondancer his maternal great-grandmother mlpeod/smilie.gif

(MOD NOTE: Originally posted by Angelic_Wonder)

Taya- 02-20-2007
Katie and I have been talking over PM.. We'll probably have Twinkle Trick and Lightmoon meet at some point, not yet of course... tho after the Baron and Night Star meet with Silver Dream, Lightmoon may go back to Fernpunkt with them as he is Night Star's betrothed. I still have to get King Nebula of Fernpunkt up. I'm probably going to change Night Star's parentage on here to coincide with her back story, Calling the Stars, and also that way, since she'll have one parent who still rules over Fernpunkt, she won't really be influenced by Silver Dream.

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