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Avairyana- 06-19-2007
NAME: Star Gale
AGE: 20
GENDER: Female
BREED/SPECIES: Twice as Fancy Unicorn
GENERATION: G1
COLOR: Picture Provided

BASIC DETAILS

POWERS: Winking. Conjuring small 'stars' for light about the size of a tennis ball that give off the brigtness of a 120watt bulb. Can call at max 5 and can hold them for 30 minutes, but that decreases by 5 minutes for every star after the first. So if she conjures all five, she can only hold them all for five minutes. The stars rotate around her body, and she can push them out to a max of 10 feet. Call quick burst of wind, strong enough at its maximum strength to feel like a hard punch at its minimum a soft breeze. She can only call this wind once every five minute at its max, and keep the breeze going continuosly for one minute.

PERSONALITY: Star Gale loves the nightime and winter, making her somewhat of a loner though she isnt standoffish and some would think. She actually enjoys the company others, and likes a good debate. She also enjoys a good run, but does not like the water or to swim. The stars on her back can be seen glowing when she bask in starlight on a clear night and she frolicks in a field, most of the time alone, but she wishes on those same stars every night for more friends to call her own.

HISTORY: Star Gale was born to Milky Way and Slugger and enjoyed a basically peaceful and uneventful childhood. She played with the other baby ponies as much as she could, but usually she was tired during the day, as she and her mother had spent much of the night playing in starlight. Once or twice during her growing years, out of fear she had conjured burst of wind, what her mother playfully referred to as star sneezes and created havoc, or atleast upset friends when their homes suddenly looked like tornados have pass through them. After the death of her parents, Star Gale just star gazes most of the time, watching the other ponies from a distance, hoping one day someone will notice her.

ADDITIONAL INFORMATION

FAMILY: Mother: Milky Way Father Slugger
FRIENDS: None
OCCUPATION: Star Gazer, Astrologist
HOME TOWN (or current area of play): Dream Valley
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Sider- 06-21-2007
She looks very good for a first character.
Usually we allow only one power for a first character but we can call the "sneezes" (hee hee, cute!) a special ability and be done with it.

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I'll give you your first approval, just one more to go.

Dragonblossom- 06-21-2007
She's super! I agree with Sider, I don't see any potential problems and I love how much thought you put into her. mlpeod/smilie-new.gif

Do you have an idea where you'd like to bring her into play?

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Go play! mlpeod/teeth.gif

Avairyana- 06-21-2007
I was thinking in Dream Valley and possibly in the Whispering Wood story since it does seem to be nightime about now in that story and that would be when Star Gale would be at her most active. If thats okay

Dragonblossom- 06-22-2007
That sounds fine. mlpeod/smilie-new.gif I don't the players there will have any problem, enjoy!

ForeignVisitor- 06-24-2007
Congrats on your first char, Avairyana! mlpeod/cool.gif I added Star Gale's parents to the official list of G1s' descendants . You can always check this list out whenever you wanna create a char that is a descendant of a canon G1 (and don't hesitate to poke that list when you have such chars approved, so I can add their ancestors to the list! mlpeod/wink.gif ) Have fun!

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