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Taya- 11-13-2006
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Name: Forgotten Wanderer, called Wanderer or simply 'The Forgotten'
Age: Teen filly 19
Breed: Flutter
Mother: Windsong
Coloring: Body is dark purple, nearly black. Mane and tail are
black. Eyes are blue.
Symbol: A path in front of a starry night sky.
Special Ability: Dream-sliding( the ability to slide in and out of
people's dreams)- She doesn't realize when she is doing this but she cannot change a pony's dream. She can only watch.
Utter Flutter: Wanderer has the ability to make fire in short bursts of fire and to light a fire.

Background:Wanderer was born and raised in Flutter Valley, though
she is currently trying to find her parents, who she doesn't know are dead. She is good friends
with Night Breeze, Creeping Ivy, Frostine and Vynn.

Sider- 11-13-2006
Hi Taya,

I'll pre-approve you for short small bursts of fire, enough to light a fire or singe a pony but nothing terribly offensive.

If you would like it to be more powerful, as in something she can use as a weapon... we can talk about that also but for the time being I'll pre-approve you for the above mentioned.

ForeignVisitor- 11-14-2006
A quick review here. She's not too complex Taya, I'm giving my pre-approval to the fire ability too, but there are a couple of things that need working out:

1) Normally, only one magical power is allowed for average ponies of darkness. I see you have two: fire creating, and "dream-sliding". However, I'm not sure about the second one. Could you ellaborate a little more on that? Can she do that at will? Does she realize when she's doing it? Does she have like..the power to do strange things in the other pony's dream while she's there, like change the dream at her will, turn it into a nightmare, etc? ^___^

Depending on how strong these powers are, I may or may not approve both. If they're just like..."short small bursts of fire", and an unconcious ability to slide in and out other ponies' dreams, but no real power on them, etc, I think I can approve both. But mind you, if you want one to be much stronger, I'd say you can only have one, kay? mlpeod/wink.gif

2) About her acquaintances:

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She is good friends with Absent Reflection, Night Breeze, Creeping Ivy, Frostine and Vynn.


Well, all are fine except, I think for Absent Reflection, right? ^__^ In the thread where Forgotten is being played, I think it's pretty obvious that she'd never met Absent Reflection before. As for whether AR considers her a good friend now or not yet...that remains to be seen mlpeod/cool.gif I think you should just remove AR from the list and it'll be fine.

I'll be waiting for your feedback, and give my approval ASAP!


Taya- 11-15-2006
She doesn't realize when she is doing this but she cannot change a pony's dream. She can only watch. And as to the fire-creating, I agree with Sider... short burst of fire and to light a fire. And AR is removed from the list for now.

Dragonblossom- 11-15-2006
Sounds good. Edit the first post to reflect the changes and then I think you'll be ready for approval. So she just can walk through other pony's dreams? Neat.

ForeignVisitor- 11-16-2006
Hey, Taya. Quick bump here to remind you to please edit the original profile with the changes you mentioned (Absent Reflection and the ellaboration of her powers). As soon as you do so, I'll give you my approval. mlpeod/wink.gif

Taya- 11-16-2006
Done!
Yes, she can just walk through... she's just a spectator mlpeod/tongue.gif

ForeignVisitor- 11-17-2006
Okie dokie, Taya! With the editions, everything is fine with me. So here we go:

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Just one more to go mlpeod/cool.gif .

Sider- 12-04-2006
Sorry, thought this was done already...

She's A-ok.

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