Luffs!! I hope his power isn't too... ambiguous. It's kinda hard to be specific. ^__^


Name: Edo (ee-doh)
Age: 15
Gender: male
Body: bluish gray with more neutral, darker gray stripes. light gray underbelly
Eyes: golden amber
Breed: Selachi
Family: unknown to him

Personality: confrontational and at least mildly sadistic by nature. He tends to be more brash and offensive than violent. He’s used to being shunned by the other species of seaponies, and uses their fear to his advantage, usually for cruel jokes which he justifies as attempts to fairly return the harassment he endures. He is very intelligent and manipulative, and is at best tactless and at worst condescending in his attitude.

History: Like most selachi, he’s spent his entire life alone, only collaborating with others of his species in spur-of-the-moment fights and group hunts. He isn’t exceptionally large or strong, so he’s learned to compensate by being very cunning, fast, and agile. He can usually be found searching the waters for prey or terrorizing seaponies for fun.

Special Abilities: None out of normal physical possibility. He is very agile and can accelerate through the water almost instantaneously, and is very skilled at being stealthy. He is also eloquent for his species, can be very persuasive, and lying comes naturally to him.

Pic (for easy reference.. or.. something): http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/40298212/

heya Kamo!

Another completely cool character!!
I've read through Edo's character profile and my first reaction is...
I think his powers wouls interfere too much with other members RPing.
Though, it would work if he used them on NPC's or with the other members agreement.

Like I said, this is my first thought on his powers... I'll give you more to work on soon.

I think I understand what you are trying to say. He has the power of deception. It is just a different form of "invisability". Instead of being visually invisable, his body and/or presence causes the other characters around him to decide they've seen nothing, or something harmless.

Of course, just like with any mind-power, if the mind of the other character could be considered strong, or the situation was specifically looking for someone/thing, then the Selachi is more likely to be seen.

I'll add more later, I should be doing my work. I like him and with some more input from the others and a deeper review I'll probably approve.

Erf, kay ^__^ I'm removing his ability- it would've been pretty difficult to RP anyways, because of its complicated nature.. changing it to skills within "normal" possibility.

Well with your edits I see no problems I approve!

I approve..

Do you like my new Avatar?? LOL


(Thanks again Kamo, she looks great!)

Ha! Why yes Sider, nice avatar- it looks familiar somehow. ^__^ Muaaha.. I like how you did her name!! It's all.. ^__^ cool.

Thanks for the approvaaallls Sider and Jen!!