'K here they kum!

Name: Dancing WindBlade

Age: 19

Gender: Male

Breed:Purebred unicorn

Appearance: Deep Purple Unicorn, with dark red hair and a Green streak in the middle, his tail's colors are swapped. His eyes are a genetic defect left eye's yellow and right eye's magenta.
He has a scar over his pink eye and a black mark under his symbol, which represents 2 dragons breathing fire.
His horn is oronated

Other: Killer form Aradia's gate. He´s preety quick, winks to give his opponent a big surprise.
(Assasin, that's his job, he does it to survive)
His parents like many others were killed in th Great Death, so he never met them, that's why he was raised by Midnight's father, who WAS leader of a small group of assasins (Midnight and her 17 brothers ,which only 2 remain) He's shy, and prefers to do things rather than talking which makes him preety deadly. But now he has a change of heart and seeks for a better life.

Ability: Float for a very few seconds and high as over 2 ponies (Lets' say, 15? ) He can wink.

I hope there aren't any probs with this guy
Bump

I´ll start with this guy

Saphire, can you enter these two characters into two separate threads, so it's easier to see which comments pertain to which characters.

Thanks!
*Colormist

Bump.
Separate threads now

Thanks for seperating them up for us Saphire.

So let's see,

His age is fine, colors sound great! So the basics are good. Now let's see if we can give him some details, m'kay?

Hmm, I don't know much about Arcadia's Gate, so we'll have to wait to hear fro mCM or one of the other MODs on that one. Why is he a killer? Do you mean an assasin? Or more like a serial killer?

Is this is unicorn ability? Or can her still teleport? If he doesn't teleport, then heck, I'd say he could float for up to five minutes or more depending on the situation and how practiced he is. Other MODs thoughts?

I'd like to know more about him, what's his personality like? Does he have any siblings? How does he feel about the Great Death and loosing his parents? Does he have any goals? Does he have a job?

Basically just some ideas about who he is and where you'd like to go with him. Doesn't have to be much. Hope this helps! This character isn't approved yet, just FYI. We need to hear from the other MODs and get some second opinions before any approvals. But it shouldn't be long.

Bump

Overall...
I really like the description on his physical appearance... He sounds very cool.

I think his occupation is good to. At the moment I have a thieves guild opperating out of Flutter Valley/Arcadia's Gate/Flutter's Pass.... it would be interesting to see these meet up... though at the moment, all the theives (the leader included) are NPC's.

Powers and abilities...
How high can he float? Could he float over another pony for example? 15 seconds float time is fine.

Can you tell me a little about his fighting skills or techniques? Does he enjoy doing what he does or is it just a job and means of survival?



There is one issue I have with both the characters combined though... As a new member, you have to start out with playing one character first. So pick either this one or the other to start with... (Key words are "start with") the after after a few posts we can get the other up and running.

So for now, I'd like you to choose one to play... rest assured that you WILL be able to play both eventually... and work on getting that one approved.

For now I'll wait to hear more from you as to which one you want to work on first.

PS. It's helpful for the Mods, if when you make changes/add info in your character bio, that you also make an additional post saying so... (I did see your "bump" when I read over the reviews but was not sure if anything had been added at first)

BUMP

Hi there....

thanks for adding the details for me, though I have one more question... I was re-reading your character's bio when I came to this part...

Midnight's father IS a leader... meaning he is alive??

Now the oldest your character can be in this game is 28 max... If Midnight is 19.. that means her father was 9 he inpregnated her mother. That or... her father died during the great death like the others close to his age, and he would have done so when Midnight was about a year old.

The oldest ponies AFTER the great death would have been 10 years old... everyone above the age of ten kicked the bucket.

I think the only way of keeping her history is by saying that it was Midnight's older sibling??? I don't know.... what do you propose?

(I'm cross posting this in Midnight's review as well.)

Bump, sorry the post was wrong, corrected

Thanks!! He looks good to me!



there you are... so one more approval to go...

Looks good to me too! Have fun playing him.

SOoooo can I play with him now ?^^

I just have one question about the floating....

Does he have to concentrate to keep himself afloat (kind of like telekinesis?), or does he say a certain word? Can it only happen under certain conditions? Can you just elaborate on the process for me?

This is just for my own curiosity, but you have been approved by two mods, so you can start playing. Have fun!