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StarCross- 03-28-2006
My 2nd character, AlNajm's Data

Age: 20

Breed: Unicorn

Family: He left his family in Sekhmet, & wishes to forget them.

Appearance: Grey skin with white underbelly & stokings, dark green eyes, light green mane & tail, a white 8-point star symbol at the hip

Brief History:
AlNajm was born to a moderate family in Sekhmet, Jeweled Desert. He was born with a defect - he had no powers. A unicorn with no powers. He became the subject of ridicule & shame. He was shun & laughed at by other unicorns. His family were ashamed of him, & they blamed him for every unfortunate & unwanted incidents that happened in their home. He was abused, mistreated & hurt. When it was too much for him to bear any longer, he packed what little things he had for belongings & ran away, vowing never to return to his hated home or see his family again. So he left, travelling many, many miles until he reached the Whispering Woods. It was there that he found a little old man in robes lying on the ground. The old man had colapsed from hunger. Without thinking of himself, AlNajm gave his own rations to the old man. As gratitude, the grateful old man gave AlNajm a simple-looking farmer's hoe as a reward. AlNajm declined, saying that he offered assistance not for personal gains. But the old guy insisted, & AlNajm finally gave in & accepted the hoe. "Know this," said the old man, "as long as your spirit is strong, this hoe will never break or rust. Use it as wisely as you use your kindness." Before AlNajm could say anything else, the old man vanished.... AlNajm chose to build his home in Whispering Woods for it was so peaceful & tranquil. He supported himself for years by doing odd jobs - delivering goods, dish-washing, floor-cleaning, farming & digging. He worked hard & never gave up. Something inside him kept telling him to prove his usefulness to the world despite his defects. He can fight very well using his trusty hoe. He likes to give out quotes that are pregnant with meaning & wisdom.

Special abilities:
None. His hoe is unbreakable, but that is NOT a Speacial Ability.

Weakness: He has no powers. He tends to overexert himself for the right things.

Sider- 03-28-2006
StarCross,

I insist that you re-read the information in the main site. Please.
I'm sorry but this character isn't going to work. This is still considered your
first character since your other one was not approved. This character is more complex than the first one. Humans are never seen in this world.. they can be but the chances of doing so are so few that it's easier to say that they are not.

Please note that Sekhmat is not a town but a temple where they focus on healing. Please keep this in mind. We've shown you where to get the information you need, please go take a look.

Take some time and actually read what this game is about. I'm sorry if you have already but the character's you submit suggest otherwise.

I am locking this thread to give you some time to consider what I have said and to give you time to go over the information required.

Feel free to PM me if you have further questions about this.

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